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Stefan Pasek's avatar

This is actually really well written. I like some of the small movements you put in like “gray curls jumping with the motion” or “clutching a croissant halfway to her mouth.” I'm a sucker for these kinds of phrases. Very creepy and well done :)

Daniel Puzzo's avatar

Chilling and sinister and bam, the ending I did not see coming. Brilliant stuff.

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